Monday, 21 September 2015

Script Feedback (LO1)


OCR Cambridge Technical Level 3 Unit 1: Analysing media products and audiences

 

Student Name:   Sam Chubb       Class: 12y            Minimum Target Grade for this LO: PASS        Provisional grade for LO1 Task 1: PASS-

Assignment: Production of a series of vlogs analysing a film produced by Warp Films or 20th Century Fox

LO1, Task 1: Investigating a media organisation

 

Task interim Key Tracking Assessments
Work to complete
Yes/No
/
PASS?
 
Feedback and Upgrades Required to reach a … grade
(TEACHER TO FILL)
My next steps (STUDENT TO FILL IN RED)
Complete?
(STUDENT TO FILL)
LO1, Task 1
 
 
 
 
1)     Ownership
conglomerate, subsidiaries, independent, cross media ownership, commercial, joint venture
2)     Operating model
Horizontal integration, synergy, vertical integration, film production process, film production cycle.
3)     Products
Examples used, target audience (niche/mass)
genre
4)     Market position
Evidence of success, international
5)     Competitors
1-2 examples
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Overall grade is
 
Pass-
P
·         Key terms have been used in places in the script.
·         Detailed understanding of how conglomerates operate.
Research Horizontal and Vertical Integration and add that to my script.
 
Merge the Market Position and Competitors section together.
 
Add in other Key Terms with explanations/definitions where necessary.
 
Sort out missing punctuation.
 
 
 
 
 
 
                              
I
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·         Merge .market position and  competitors together.
·         You need to make it clear that 20th Century Fox is owned by 21st Century Fox. Also 21st Century’s subsidiaries are Star TV, Fox radio along with 20th Century Fox. 20th Century Fox also own subsidiaries in TV and Film and that it is News Corp that own magazine and newspaper subsidiaries.
N
·         Include the missing key terms into your script.
·         Using the above feedback, fill in the ‘my next steps’ section in red.
·         Hand in the redraft of this work on Friday 25th September.
Literacy/ Numeracy/Oracy
Assessment
·         P 
·         Key terms used – see words highlighted in green in the ‘ Work to complete section’
·         I  
·         Include the missing key terms into your script.
·         SPAG addressesd
·         N Include the key terms and punctuation that is missing

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